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自己做了个网站， 业余水平， 请大家帮忙看看， 有什么建议？ (水城百事)
by KWCG-cleaning 
, Tuesday, March 29, 2011, 11:12
http://kwcgclean.com/index.html
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诚信 守时 专业 认真
专业地毯清洁服务,超强机器,蒸汽深层擦洗，采用环保清洁剂，除污除菌、除臭除虫、清除宠物尿渍和宠物毛发,快干洁净，价格公平合理
左边几个按钮的颜色太亮了一点，试着把它们的明度降低点，其他板式和图片搭配得都很好
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你这么一说， 是感觉有些刺眼， 多谢。
by KWCG-cleaning , Tuesday, March 29, 2011, 11:34 @ yy猫
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诚信 守时 专业 认真
专业地毯清洁服务,超强机器,蒸汽深层擦洗，采用环保清洁剂，除污除菌、除臭除虫、清除宠物尿渍和宠物毛发,快干洁净，价格公平合理
你起来了阿？你要的药我已经买回来了，按你说的两盒。看哪天给你送过去，顺便看你家新宝宝
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谢谢兰花姐！我天天都带宝宝在家。随时欢迎。
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我不懂网页设计，只看了看首页，帮你挑了挑文法的毛病，希望你别嫌我烦。别的页面等晚上再看。
We have been cleaning carpets in the Waterloo region for years.
我把这句放在后面了。
Areas we service are: Kitchener, Waterloo, Mississauga , Cambridge, Guelph, Stratford, Woodstock, Brantford and all surrounding areas.
改成：Areas that we serve are:.... 或者：Our service areas include: ....
We do carpet cleaning for both residential and commercial.
改成：We clean both residential and commercial carpets. 或者：We are specialized in both residential and commercial carpet cleanings.
We offer Carpet Cleaning, Upholstery Cleaning, Tile and Grout Cleaning, Mattress Cleaning, Carpet and Fabric Protection, and more.
offer 后面加冒号，内容没必要大写。
When it's time to hire a professional cleaning firm, look for some one you can trust to deliver outstanding results you will be pleased with long after the job is done.
改成：We have been cleaning carpets in the Waterloo Region for years. When it's time to hire a professional cleaning firm, look for someone (是一个词）you can trust. You will be pleased by our outstanding service and long lasting results. Satisfaction Garanteed!
多谢多谢，等你看完， 我统一修改
by KWCG-cleaning , Tuesday, March 29, 2011, 12:22 @ 职业病
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诚信 守时 专业 认真
专业地毯清洁服务,超强机器,蒸汽深层擦洗，采用环保清洁剂，除污除菌、除臭除虫、清除宠物尿渍和宠物毛发,快干洁净，价格公平合理
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羊羊羊
多谢鼓励
by KWCG-cleaning , Tuesday, March 29, 2011, 12:23 @ aeiou
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诚信 守时 专业 认真
专业地毯清洁服务,超强机器,蒸汽深层擦洗，采用环保清洁剂，除污除菌、除臭除虫、清除宠物尿渍和宠物毛发,快干洁净，价格公平合理
不错了，几乎可以去接网站生意
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哈哈， 过奖过奖！
by KWCG-cleaning , Wednesday, March 30, 2011, 09:12 @ 了
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诚信 守时 专业 认真
专业地毯清洁服务,超强机器,蒸汽深层擦洗，采用环保清洁剂，除污除菌、除臭除虫、清除宠物尿渍和宠物毛发,快干洁净，价格公平合理
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